All Comments on 'Mother/Daughter Honeymoon Cruise Ch. 04'

So yummy, and well written! Thank you...

Keep going, looking forward to the next one

just please don't make us wait 6 months til the next chapter - momentum and all that :)

and hopefully Heidi will get the come-uppance she deserves, without getting to cum, of course

just get on with it, you started off really good and now you are getting caught up in creating a story instead of just dealing with the two main characters, get rid of the ex. This had nothing and will have nothing to add to the excitement compared to a mom/daughter relationship. Get back to it. What does any of this have to do with the mom daughter that could not be summed up with one sentence with the distracting ex girlfriend and be done and moved on. No one else matters more than the mom/daughter. I skipped all of this story with an ex girlfriend.

I can't wait for the next one!!

Your story was great. Can' wait for the next chapter. Hope it is less then six months =)

I have a hard time figuring out how you will end this story. I hope there is more soon, this story is so hot and I love the slow, sensual build up. I love stories that don't jump right into the sex. The ones that build to a good climax (no pun intended) are the best.

Can't wait for the next one

Please! come back soon and keep us boiling in this amazing erotic series!

I detect a tsunami of lust coming along and this time the Titanic will be engulfed in taboo inflamed fire!

Hurry with the next installment..!

Please don't leave us in suspense

fantastic story. Really nead a next chapter but??????? when

It's been five years, please come back and finish!! I'm desperate to know if they go all the way!!

I am enjoying this story but not happy about waiting - Lol. You get mw worked up and I have to find my own release. Love it so I am just being impatient.

I keep hoping to see more of this some day!