All Comments on 'Mother-In-Law Massage'

Congratulations you managed to fit nearly all the clichès into this story.

It's not of It's have. And people are saying this is a well written story? Easily pleased then.

Awesome! I have wanted my MIL for over 20 years!

Hot hot. Nice n juicy. Well written n edited. Great

Your story hit the bull’s eye on my secret fantasy. Great , hot story and love the building sexual tension.

Very very hot

Very intense! Loved the thick grey pubic hair--that is so real. And, she was wet and tight. Wow! Every man's dream.

That was so hottt I would love to do that to my bbw mother in law

Only 'could have' not 'could of.'

Overall though very very good.

Some years ago I would have loved to gotten into a position like that with the lady who eventually became my MIL - there were 30 years separating the 'then' and 'now.' And 'now' was nearly 15 years ago.

She was a BIG titted, hot lady - you could tell just by the way she did and said things.

There has to be more.

I ove the fact that the author indicated that Fel had "grey pubes' . Women's pubic haiir does change color as they age and does turn grey. It is quite sexy to see a woman with grey pubic hair.

...Great story nonetheless. Hope there is a follow up. Normaly with all the Hours they have to kill, this should do. Waiting for second chapter.

Thanks for sharing this erotic story.

I absolutely love stories about older women with ample bodies and younger men (sons, and in-laws). I was sad to see it end where it did, as the man had such a fixation about Fel's fantastically generous ass, that I wanted to read about him paying homage to it... fondling it, caressing it, kissing it, licking it, tongue-fucking it... and finally fucking Fel's big ass. I can only open there will be a Part 2.

Very good story Champ - nice slow build up adding to the anticipation of their erotic encounter. The only slight criticism is that the ending lets it down. No proper end to the story or hint of more to follow and the last sentence is poor English. Minor point though - really enjoyed it and hope you continue the story.

Thanks for your comments please feel free to contact me champ1on@hotmail.co.uk

I really and I mean really liked this.......MORE

Please continue. This was very erotic.

Would love to hear more! Please...