by TylerR
Never read anything so bad I would give it "00"if I could
I'd like to read about some of their future sexual bouts, where he makes his mother in law his slut and she will do anything he asks of her, just to get him to fuck her.
Thanks for the read
I like the concept, but you REALLY need an editor. Otherwise, you will lose readers, regardless of how good the whole concept is.
I agree this is a good start. These anonymous cowards calling for editing is real stupid, especially for a porn story on a porn site. They are laughable at best. Just ignore them, or even better require any comments to sign in. This is a good start, and one thing I haven't seen too much of is the mother-in-law and son-in-law falling in love, and leaving the daughter. That would be interesting.
Why did you stop writing this ? Best MIL story I have read! HOTTTT!