All Comments on 'Mother Is MILF'd By Temptation'

by Sludge11

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Pirate TregarePirate Tregarealmost 12 years ago
no offense, but...

sludge indeed. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Erotica vs. Pornography

In my opinion, this story illustrates the difference between erotica and pornography. I will leave it up to readers of the story to determine which category this story falls into. As for me, I find erotica to be more interesting than pornography. I didn't find this story to be very interesting.

thebuffalothebuffaloalmost 12 years ago

Wow. This reads a whole lot like a bad parody of the really bad fuck books we passed around when I was a very young lad in Vietnam.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Doesn't read easily...I couldn't get past the first couple of paragraphs...too many adjectives, no flow

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
talk about IR sludge

try again when you get out of fourth grade

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Unreadable!

Forced my way to the middle of the first page, spot-checked the rest - absolutely appalling. How old are you - 14?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
One of the best stories! Please write more!

Amazing story! Really want to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Best ever can you better it ?

You just have to get writing now this was brilliant and please dont change your writing style it's perfect......more youg gangs milfing women please.......great

grnspectregrnspectreover 6 years ago
Curious

Where is the first part that you mentioned

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
deez nuts!

i don't know wtf are these people complaining about literature. most of us are just here for the nut.

Radical11Radical11almost 4 years ago
nice one but...

It's like catching a movie in the middle of the story... What's the background of all this?

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