All Comments on 'Mother Mary I'

Stories like this are certainly not for everyone, and it is difficult to to avoid having the situations feel "forced", but I think what you have here is rather good.

If you enjoyed writing part 1, I hope you will continue.

I agree, there should definitely be a part 2 to this story, but this has been on here since 4/12/12. Maybe MessMaster's just taking time to make it really good, like this one.

probably the best story I have ever read in my entire life. Love the farmyard parts- not enough stories have that sort of thing

Probably one of the best WAM stories of all time.