All Comments on 'Mother’s New Governess Ch. 01'

please continue, very enjoyable

I loved the way you tried to emulate the writings of the era.

Well done

of 19th century erotic writings for gentlemen of leisure. Pray continue good sir :-)

I really enjoyed the easy way Edwina fitted into her changing circumstances. Well worth 5 out of 5 votes. Lovely.

A great tale ... very reminiscent of 'The Pearl'. Well done :)

Please

I'm not all the way through yet, but "hurd" for "heard" and upstairs "made' , presumably meant to be "maid". I'll read the rest in the morning.

OK. while I do enjoy a good read this story was really difficult to read. Brit'ish people do not talk like bloody country bumpkins who cannot talk properly. I know the author was trying to make it sound like this was in the Victoria era...but guess what that dimwitted bobby does not know jack. I mean sure he made a noble attempt and he should be commended for it considering that he is a 55 year old man with an IQ of that if a 12 year old who lives in his parents attic. But still....He could have just used modern English like what they do in the movies when they make films that are set in the past. Maybe he should take a cue from this story and self mutilate himself for writing this drivel.

The attention to detail was impressive! Loved it!

A work of erotic fiction that is very, very well crafted x x x x

Read your story because you mentioned the aunt, I want to be a willing aunt for my sister's 18 year old son. I must admit that I skimmed over your story. But as one who understands a women with "dual taste" you should know that as a sexually active women I do not have "tatch". I keep my pussy shaved because it's more so much more sexy and convenient when I go down on another women. Also, men tend to favor a clean pussy and are more inclined to respond in a positive manner when I request they, "Taste how wet you've made me." No matter what period you place a story, no women "pounds" a man's cock with lightning speed. Would you want me to be hurting you before I lowered myself to my knees and took your big fountainpen into my mouth. Too bad your not Loni's nephew.

I love the details in this story! It does take some getting used to, but you've done a marvelous job with it! Thank you!

The weird English wording and weird 'cleansing' WHY?

As good as reading "The Pearl" or "The Oyster", oh those naughty Victorians.

The first version was great but this one is fantastic!

Wealth seems to make illicit stories all the more interesting. Refreshing stuff.

Great job! Very steamy. Loved the unique setting. kisses...Britt

It's the most erotic victorian story I ever read.. The plot.. The narration ..and above all the language ..my goodness.. I am in love with this ..

thanks thanks thanks n thanks for sharing such a wonderful erotica

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