by MitchFraell
A friend of mine caught his mom cheating whe he was a teen.He was never the same again.He become a hard guy, never staying much with any girl.He dumps them before he gets cheated on...sad.
5*!
Thanks for writing a real story something different, but could be true. Just a slice of life through different eyes, Thanks for sharing this GEM of a story.
Started off quite sad but the integrity of the father and quality people around him caused this to be a happy family tale. Oh, and the skank "smoker" got what she deserved. A lousy fucking life. Worthless cunt.
Five Stars
The father moved on and had his HEA. He didn't let his ex's cheating determine his future. I know there are some that will hold on to that hurt while too afraid to move on happily with their lives.
i would have bashed his fucking head in. set his balls on fire.
how fucking dare he contact that whore and give her a chance to fuck with their lives and to bring up the whore to his dad and to tell her anything thing about him after what she did....... i would have dragged his ass naked behind my car till he died.
I hate do gooders.....that who forgive to move on crap...he was a weak ass shit head. felt sorry for Tyrone, i encourage every nigger who can fuck a cunt away from her family to do so.....ain't nothing funnier than a dead creating ex white wife-nothing.
what a looser is Anon. This is probably your best story I read. A slice of life. It would do to describe the emotions of the characters a little more.
Well done
Chilley
That was such a story! So realistic, probably not far removed from reality for quite a lot of people, sadly.
I came here reading 'sexual' stories, and this is certainly NOT a sexual story. BUT it had me 'hooked'.
Good storytelling, brilliant characterisation, and 'gritty'......
.....and SAD.
And it's a story that's all to common in real life, too.
So sad and with so many real life truisms. Give it up for the brave and fearless father who tried his best with the Ho/Slut for the sake of his kids. And also for being an even bigger man for putting a baby that was not his needs before his own. I’m honestly sitting here contemplating if in the same shoes if I could do that! Probably not
WONDERFULLY WRITTEN, a sad story that could very well be true. Robert's dad did well, as did his children. Robert and Tiffany's mother got hers, she was a drug pushing, and using, whore. The plain and simple truth...
Reasonably written. But I didn't rate it. Emotionally I wanted to give it a 1. But that wouldn't be fair. It's a very dark story. One I wish I hadn't read. Depressing as hell but all too real. At least there is a hero: Dad!
Excellent, gritty, gut-punch of a story. Easily a five on sheer writing ability.