All Comments on 'Motherfaker'

women/moms like myself... as well as bi couples.. would have been so much more turned on...& story would have been so much better had there been stud/jock sons included...with family male bi action... especially with dad/son/mom... as well as what was written..

and yet..once again omitted like 99% of posts here..

The narration revealed your insight into the mind of the mother. It was masterfully done.

Thanks, you covered many of my favorites in one story! There was a nice build up between Jesse and Barb,

Also, would have liked to have read more exploration of the incidents Megan and Annie had with Mrs. Conners/Mrs. Danner. I thought Jesse was going to have an encounter with one of the teachers, but it was nice how you transitioned to the detective and the D.A.

Please write more stories!

It's nice to see you writing again. We've missed your stories.

Had to be said.

Deeply perverted, of course, but excelent one-handed reading.

Whose bloody story is it, for Chrissakes? Why don't you write one for yourself instead of carping at established and erudite authors?

Little Miss - Thanks for a lovely read. Freddy

am so glad you're back with a new, long, and luscious tale! thank you so very much for this wonderful story full of so much horny and utter debauchery! it's great!

A horny, nasty story - thank you. (And a killer last line) I'm off to read more now

Amazing, this writer is the best!

Really really great to have another story from you. I haven't read it, just downloaded it so I can take my time reading it! I have no idea who that anonomous in USA is but he/she is not very proud of their name. Why is he/she asking you to write about stud/jocks. People who like lesbian stories read lesbian stories. People who like stud/jock stories might try hetero or male/male stories.

This was wild and crazy! It was wonderfully crude and lewd. I loved it!

thought FAMILY AFFAIR was your best till i read MOTHERFAKER ... there is just no one who can actually transport the reader so well... your writing is fantastic, and has the best lesbian domination scenes ever written by anyone...so so very arousing...and the hottesttttttt!!!!!!

you are the best...

with gratitude(for bringing alive a fantasy) and love

yours truly,

ravie

I just can't resist your stories of otherwise respectable women and popular high school girls (mothers, teachers, cheerleaders, etc.) in engaged in secret lesbian lust undergrounds. I don't care much for the piss stuff, though. I end these comments with a simple question. Do you think that in Brady Bunch fantasyland, Marcia would like to slip into the shower with her mom Carol and seduce her into some heady lesbian incest while the rest of the family is out? Now, that is a fuckliscious thought, yes?

Your stories make a person think. Would that high school prom queen and her girls friends be planning the systematic seductions of their typical suburban moms? Does that English teacher day dream about 69ing with any of the girls in her AP class? Is that PTA matron with the horn rimmed glasses plotting to get her best friend's pretty daughter into bed for some sapphic ecstasy, only to discover her best friend and best friend's daughter were both wanting to grope, lick and suck her into orgasmic bliss? Is the high principal also the bitch queen of lesbian lust? Does a lesbian daisy chain run through every suburban community, unbeknownst to any males? Maybe. Only littlemissblair can tell us for sure.

awesome

great great great, you rock i really enjoyed it, i just wished a happy ending for Megan and her mother like becoming lovers or something , but very nicely done

can`t believe this is the end of the story hope there is a part 2 to it carry on the good work

lick me PLEASE.... this was so erotic, leaves me wanting SO MUCH MORE!

This rocks

Well written but disgusting. Something a little more realistic woulda been easier to swallow.

i could read your stories for hours. So sexy!

This goes against all of my morals and is more than a little unrealistic ... but oh my god, it was SO fucking hot!!

Little Miss Blair has mastered the art of hot erotic writing.

Just wow. I liked a lot, but I'm not how I feel about it otherwise.

Is 'Principal'. A principle is entirely different. Very imaginative story!

A very interesting tale taking the reader to so many different intimate situations! A long story but enjoyable.

a great story, very sexy but the final paragraph is truly fantastic, seriously good

Is there a part two to this story? If so plz tell me

It is not, in any sense complete. At least two more chapters are needed so you can put to rest all the separate situations that are here.

Great story .i stroked my fat thick cock the whole time i read this story snd came several times.its still hard.. all ten inches

that these girls are underage. Like the woman in the end needing supervised visitation. If the girl was of legal age that would never be an issue. But it was still a good read.

Unbelievably erotic and sexy. Young wet smelly panties are a real turn-on.

I have fingered my wet pussy so many times to this! Sooo many lewd, nasty parts! But two of the hottest: when she gets fucked in front of her daughter then eats her out, and when she tells her best friend about going down on her friend's daughter--and the friend cums all over her fingers just hearing about it! Makes me want to lick pussy every time!

this was so bad it was stupid,you are telling me a mother who is married did that to all her daughters friends, I had to skip the last 3 pages that is how bad it was, I can only hope that this is the one and only chapter because I can't read anymore of it

They don't get much better than this.

5🌟's

This story was unbelievable! Sex was all over the place. Every turn had me cuming all over. I can not believe this really happened. I did enjoy and could not let go until the end.

unbelievable story. had me hard the whole time. well almost, I didn't make it to the end.

You're a fabulous writer and I have rarely read better main characters, her mind and her debauchery. But you don't understand narrative, nor are you a good reader. You cannot present an entirely different picture of your characters (Barb and her daughter) after the reader has established his own vision of them. Also, you took so much time building up your two biggest, sexiest characters in Rachel and your Meg, then you tossed them off like they were nothing. Piss poor choices, but great filthy sexual scenes.

Everything a good story needs. A very provocative,well written tale.

THEY ARE SEX STORIES, AND INCEST STORIES, BUT, THIS IS JUST TOO SICK! MY GOD, THIS IS NOTHING BUT TRASH! SOMEBODY HAS A VERY SICK MIND. IT'S NOT SEXY, IT'S JUST PUKE.

Not well written, from the point of view of grammar or of plot. Crude, illogical and unconvincing. But it's SO hot! So sexy it's scary!

way too many people i my opinion

Very filthy and nasty. It ends on a good note, leaving reader hungry for more. Any more, I think would have become repetitive.

I loved it, and my lifelong friend loves it (she loves Dom/Sub lesbian porn).

Minor criticism…grammar, usage and spelling need attention.

Enjoyable read thx for sharing….

Because its at the beginning story.

Sounds like she chose to be a trophy wife and was having a mid life crisis.

The power of "materialistic things" over true feelings.

Sad state of affairs.

"We eat our young..." OMG what a line!!!

When the teacher came over with her strap on dildo and raped momma, I no longer cared if she had gone upstairs a drank a bottle of bleach. I get so tired of weak ass protagonist in stories like this.

Since when does a mother allow her daughter to run over her like that? A real mother would have kicked baby girls’ ass at the first sign of verbal disrespect; son and daughter alike.

Read this a year ago and loved it then still love it now thx for sharing but like others it needs MORE pretty pls? Us gals need a bit more always haha

Wow great story what about a follow up

Total rubbish started promising. then degenerated to absolute garbage