All Comments on 'Mother's Day'

Man what a place to leave off.

Unclear upon your intent within the less fifty-seventy-five words, however I applaud the lantern you carry into several twisting pathways when Allen and Laura cross over into discovery mode and take the time to be honest about intent and goals.

This one is sad, that is all there is to say

you never know what you're going to get. Great ending! But one thing you know you're going to get--quibbles, via "Send Feedback".

This stories begs to be continued. Where does all this lead?

Just phenomenal; the writing, descriptions, dialogue, story, ect...

I really enjoyed it, and I do hope there's a part 2 out soon because this story isn't complete yet. I really want to read what happens next.

I skimmed through your other stories and put you on my favorite author's list, once again, your writing is fantastic and I can't wait to read your other stories and your future work.

Keep it up.

breaking Lit moulds both in writing quality, and plot.

Thank you.

I know I shouldn't - BUT - what an excellent piece of writing,Well Done !!

...you rascal,you completely fooled me :-)

Excellently presented !! Top Marks.

Caught me by surprise.

Great ending

The story was cut too short and she could either move away or finish the job!

lololol,,,,loved it,,,,,,family dynamic has now changed for the better,,,many family duscussions to follow,,,lolol.