All Comments on 'Mother's Helper'

Pubic hair to her navel. You lost me there

Okay, a hairy belly doesn't appeal to everybody but, did it detract from the story? The tirade in the next comment was as useful as a paper frying pan. What were the supposed faults in the story? Be specific!

If readers want to attack a story, they should identify themselves instead of using the spineless option of anonimity.

Personally, I'm enjoying this story and looking forward to the next chapter.

5/5

This is a very good story, not the best, but a very good one. I always feel if your going to complain leave a name, leaving as "anonymous" is cowardly. Writing a story isn't easy either, I don't think I could do it. I do like to thank the person for taking the time to write it. It was a good story.

The ending felt a little rushed but over all most enjoyable.

waiting on the next chapter about them all..dougie

It sounds like they will have a good time together. I love these kind of stories.

I know that people don't like comments where the comentor is anonymous, but I don't know if I want an account yet. I should get one though, I love literotica. Anyways, I really enjoyed your story, it was really good. Short, to the point, but still able to build a relationship. If you keep adding on, bringing in more characters. I think, know, that you'll reach gold in no time.

Need the next installment, very nicely done and am anticapating the next chapter.

A little bit obvious at some points, but still HOT! Can't wait for part 2.

More please, I like this story.

can't wait for the next Ch,, there is a lot more to happen. Oh to have such a horny mother & friend.

Everything sounds so easy & sexy.

Kept me hard all the way through,, Good

He is a really good boy to be helping his injured mother. I should watch out for the next installment.

Very well written and a good storyline. Even though the storyline has been used numerous times, the author has made it his own with the addition of the extra characters.

I hope to see more soon.

Thanks

Maintain the same momentum that is in this one and the next chapter should be real good. I'm eagerly awaiting it.

I liked the story but I am bad about seeing a story that says Ch. 2 and I go on because I don't want to read all night. I will just have to remember to read July ~~ Ch. 2

Good chapter 1 and had more sex in it than the two others I just read put together..!* Worth a (5)*

This story went from 0-!0 in about two chapters. If part two is going to be as hot or hotter. Please hurry!!!!!!!

good job!

I can hardly wait to read the next installment. I hope he fucks both Sally and his Mothers' asses real good.

What is it about almost every author of mother/son incest has to go for some anal sex? That tends to ruin a good hard-on for some folks!

reminded me the Lifetime Movie stereotype. And he confessed way too fast. Predators just don't do that. Would have been simpler for Sally to catch him with his office receptionist.

Also, the suggestion that Sally invite her daughter(s) over for some straight sex in front of their mother while he also shags his own mother is pretty darned absurd. Better motivation would have helped.

Very good story line. Lots of potential partners. Please keep it cumming.

A hot interesting story, but quite an introduction of characters to keep track of.

The son starts with his wounded mother and. Is progressing to family friend and possibly the daughter. Maybe he should restrict his activity to the adult women.

I think it's queer,

why do all these motherfucking stories always have anal and sweetie?

enough already

I lost the plot when Paul became Rick then back again.

Plus it just seemed too monotonous.

I've read this story twice now and not got to the second story as I love how good this one is. Don't think I've cum so hard reading a story before!!

YUK!!! 1 star

Enjoyed the story. The character development of the mother (Rita) was good; howe er, the character of the son (Paul) requires some depth. The relationship between mother and son is logical. For the mother to be upset with her son's initial suggestion is logical based on her past experience and psychological makeup. Howevr, she was able to recognize/accept the truth of her situation. She also realized the safety, security and unconditional her son offered her. She realized he only wanted to please her withoutexpectation of any return. Finally, the sexual and emotional epiphany of Rita for Paul was wonderful. She realized that their union was one of equals who were mutually consenting to an intimate, sensual and sexual relationship without restrictions, without positional powerplay nor the risk of emotional or physical abandonment.