All Comments on 'Mother's Helping Hand Ch. 16'

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 8 years ago

Good. I'm glad they finally fucked....sort of. It only took 16 chapters and almost 11 months. Hopefully the next installment will have the mom really fuck him and not just sit on him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
FINALLY!!!

It took you long enough to get around to this inevitable climax (pun intended)! Curious to read what happens next. Thank you for keeping the storyline interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.

lone_wolf716lone_wolf716over 8 years ago
HURRAY !!!!

Bobby got to feel the warmth of a hot pussy. And it was Alison's .. Now all he needs is to have her (his mother) on her back and drill her hot cave. Then fill it up with his juice......

inreaderinreaderover 8 years ago
:)

I vote for "surrender" version:)

rodavrodavover 8 years ago
It is a 5

very exciting. Hope next time Bobby will also have a chance to be close face to face with his Mom's pussy. This time his mom lets him inspect her pussy close up and let him eat her while she sits on the balcony table and another couple from their own balcony watches. Then they will have another tight embrace in bed with Bobby on top and his hard cock balls deep inside his mom but not moving in and out as what the mom would want. At least it is not intercourse.

YamiBoyYamiBoyover 8 years ago
^__^

Awesome chapter. I loved it. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. ^__^

happymuffinhappymuffinover 8 years ago
Man

i give you 5 big stars but I need more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great

Very exciting. Please continue the series. Really like the slow teasing pace and the conflicted but horny mom.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great chapter

finally that cock feels the wet pussy of Alison.

Hopefully Alison will ride that cock the next morning to wake Bobby

rodavrodavover 8 years ago

Even though what they have done was not intercourse for the reason that her son's cock did not move in and out of her pussy, she worriedly said to Bobby that what they have done was incest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Are you shitting me?

16 chapters and they still haven't fucked! 1 star!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
IMPREGNATE HER

We know that his prick spasmed of the thought.. at least we're getting warmer..

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Possibly the best story I've ever read on this site

I cannot wait for the next chapter this story has been an incredible ride

Great job

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fantastic chapter

One of my favorites, DS, and considering some of your earlier entries that's saying something! I love the reluctance and hesitance.

Now that a serious line has been crossed we know where it'll lead...one suggestion, if I may: please don't have them 'talk it out' then make love. Fans of this series are clearly into the slow build and the reluctance angle, crossing previously unthinkable boundaries. For that reason I think them 'doing the deed' should be another reluctant step being crossed. So my suggestion is don't have them discuss the next boundary. Start in the shower, where this all began. Alison's back turned to Bobby, or perhaps one of them slips. Penetration, or even just cock against pussy. Hesitation, Alison scolding herself for wanting it, but then she pushes back on it and it's go time!

Just my two cents, you haven't failed us yet!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I agree with above ^ :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Alison Needs Bobbie to Suk Her Pussy

After she has cum on his dick.

Anne

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Story

it is really the best story I've ever read. Well you should add date of your upcoming episode

Dick_SpankerDick_Spankerover 8 years agoAuthor
Number 17 underway

I'm starting 17 this week, hopefully have it finished by the end of the month.

inreaderinreaderover 8 years ago
:)

Thx for the info:) I can't wait to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Finally

This has been one of the most erotic stories I have ever read, I am so glad he has finally put that monster cock in his Mother's pussy. I have read and reread each chapter and jerked my cock raw reading them, I will be sorry when it comes to an end!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing

Look forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Will it be much longer?

Just curious how much longer till the next chapter comes out. Never doubt you have a devoted and eager fan base willing to read your stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
damn! NEED the 17th part, this month has already ended. but in next part keep some reluctance non-concent part , like in the starting chapters , make the mom feels what disgust gross she is doing she must not enjoy it , boby should. make her feel that"i c

damn! NEED the 17th part, this month has already ended. but in next part keep some reluctance non-concent part , like in the starting chapters , make the mom feels what disgust gross she is doing she must not enjoy it , boby should. make her feel that"i can't belive I am doing this" then make the other factors to make it happen somehow . use good words, discription of feeling face expression and events sequence more griping , unexpected , not obvious from one para to second para , it should not be pridictable - LIKE IN THE STARTING chaperts.keep the suspence and dam good sensible creative ending on how the mom feeling disgust and guilt , backing away every moment , IS MADE TO DO THAT TABOO!!!

Dick_SpankerDick_Spankerover 8 years agoAuthor
Ch 17

Ok I know we're into December now but real life and all that... anyway, 17 is nearly in the can so I will be hopefully getting it proofed and approved this week. Thanks for your patience.

DS

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Take your time man! This story is perfect. I'd rather have you take your time then rush it. Thanks for everything!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great story worth the wait

take your time king DS

it will be worth the wait and this is the only story series I have ever followed

keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Eagerly waiting for the next one man! the best series by far - so so erotic!

Dick_SpankerDick_Spankerover 8 years agoAuthor
17

Now complete, being proofed prior to submission

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Completion

Can't wait, how long more.

Dick_SpankerDick_Spankerover 8 years agoAuthor
Finally

17 is now uploaded and awaiting approval. Hope it's worth the wait!

DS

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I had a huge orgasms when huis mom had hers i can only imgaine

how that big hard thick cock felt after all this time she has been loving it!! 5 for all your chapters a 1000 for this one

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

i love it so much.u are doing such a great job!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I have jacked off so many times to this chapter

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