by KathyandJ
I loved the first chapter but talk about it stopping abruptly! Having the mom rise out of the water commenting that her bathing suit was somewhat see through and then.....nothing seemed like an unnatural place to stop. Hopefully chapter two will be longer.
Truly one of the better stories in a long time. So happy both are good looking and have good lives.
The story is off to a good start, ends a bit abruptly, but desperately needs editing
a son's love for his mother is pure. It isn't just a question of love for what each has between their legs, mom's love for her boy's fat young cock and her kid's love for the hairy hole he came out of, though it is that too. It's the love of soul mates, of two persons with the closest bond possible. I look forward to the consummation of the love of Justin and his mother.
"Abstain from penetration" ?????????????? Nobody talks like that for gods sake!
I loved the story. And the penetration thing was awesome love sex is more than penetration mom and I played like that without penetration from time I was twelve until I was twenty one
Captures the feelings and emotions of many mothers and sons. Few have the courage to act. Those that do often experience "The feeling of pure love, the hottest, truest, deepest love"
Mom son sex is the most forbidden but the most sacred form of copulation. The guy here truly loves his mom like a goddess. That's great and I hope they will make love soon and probably have the fruit of their forbidden love, a child.
There is an air of romance in this story that sets the soul on fire and it shows everytime they tell each other how much they love each other
I am taken in by your story, please continue this very subtle and loving erotique relationship between her and her son..
I think you're off to such a beautiful start with this story. It's well-written and certainly convincing in the way you're describing each of the details. Looking very forward to chapter 2!
Beautiful beginning!. I love a well-written mother-son romance. It is a special love to begin with. True romance makes is so much better. I look forward to your next installment.. Liked and favorited.
Can't wait for more. You have done an amazing job, great writing style!
Good pace, good details, great story!! Hope to see more from you.
Excellent beginning. But we all know mother needs her son deep inside of her...unprotected...skin on skin.
She needs her sons hard, thick manhood burrowed deeply in her love grotto. She needs to wrap her long, shapely legs around her son's sinewy waist while mother and son moan, kiss, and writhe in their incestuous mating dance.
Yes. Mother needs her son to fuck her pussy. And she to fuck his cock.
Mother needs her womanhood to clutch and spasm in orgasm all around her son's thrusting manhood. Mom needs to feel her own son's overheated cock twitching...jerking...cumming inside of her orgasming pussy.
Let them have what they so desperately want. And need.
Make it so....
If you intend to continue—and I hope you do—I would prefer you move at a faster pace.
But it's YOUR story, so tell it as you wish...