All Comments on 'Mother's Peach Cobbler'

Quite a fun story, is there to be another with this young woman?

Really quite good. Personally I would have liked to hear the young lady vocalize just a few more words. It is however a 10 (ten) in my estimation.

I certainly hope there will be more - this is a really good story. You brought the reader (me) in with your descriptions and I hope to be invited back soon.

Very well written and even better, believable, unlike most contibutions on this site. Erotic, sensual, and gripping.

god, your writing is fabulous.

Please, please please, give these girls some of that experienced cock. I'm in need.

Perhaps it's because one of my favorite secret fantasies involves older, emotionally sophisticated and sexy men and young, innocent women--I'm going to keep checking for more work by you.

This was so hot and lovely, better than any peach cobbler I can imagine.

I loved the naivete of the young woman and the way you coupled it with her emerging lust and forwardness. I especially liked the minimal dialogue--the way the story unfolded almost entirely in her head. Excellent work.

Does the young woman find any others reason to visit the next door neighbor?

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Wonerfully done. Your story kept me cheering her on. If I had any complaint, it would be that he didn't give her what she wanted, his dick in her pussy. Keep up the good work.

Very well written. Absolutely fantastic

I came to this 2x

I enjoyed thae anticipation and wanted to read more!