All Comments on 'Mother's Used Condom Ch. 02'

by zipp2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great but needs a little work.

Excellent story….Please keep it up. Just a small criticism if I might. You have used the word “confident” several times when you mean to say “confidence”. She is helping the men become confident by increasing their confidence. Trying using a spell check as there are other spelling errors which may be small, but they are distracting to the reader. In addition you said that the 57 year old Leon had been married for 50 years. That would have made him 7 at the time he got married. Proof reading and spell checking would have made this story perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Confused

A confused plot but this has the makings of a good series,I would suggest that you concentrate on the mother son relationship before bringing others into the story,also needs proof reading.

ctalonctalonover 16 years ago
Good story. Keep it going.

paradox167paradox167over 14 years ago
Awesome potential and well written

Both the stories are very hot and sexy, in my opinion if you are writing another chapter - why not let the mother try some cuckoldry on her son and have him eat and clean her out after her sessions with black men.

Anyway, very well written and please do continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
one hot story

Iwish I had the courage to try it, man that sounds like a blast corbiel ontario

VoyeurWhiteMaleVoyeurWhiteMaleover 13 years ago
Exciting story

Please add more chapters.

malagebmalagebalmost 13 years ago
Excellent job

You've written such an amazing story!!we all want to see ch.03.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Chapter 3

Please write a 3rd chapter. This is amazing

tonyafellytonyafellyalmost 12 years ago
ditto!

please write the third (and fourth, etc) part of the story, judy has to help her son!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

White trash cum dump

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Junk yard cum dump and her little asswipe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice

It would be hot to see your mom letting a Blackman into her bedroom and him satisfying her. To see her white thighs open and his black ass going up and down driving his stiff black dick in her.

hawk200377hawk200377over 8 years ago
messed up

This was messed up from the start plus this is in the wrong category there was no incest in this fucked up story if you are going to put it in the incest category make damn sure there is incest involved

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Praise

Hot story !

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More !

Please write a third part .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Do A Third Follow-up,Where She Gets Pregnant With A Beautiful Dark Gold Caramel Mocha Brown Sugar Skinned Mulatto Baby Girl And Her Scott Gets A Black Girl He's Secretly Dating Pregnant As Well.

DavidOKCDavidOKCalmost 5 years ago
yes

I cant wait for her son to fuck her after she is fucked bareback and eat that black cum from her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Cum

Add in another white mature slut... call her Ann. Have Ann and Judy take multiple bareback loads and share those loads with son. Have son service mom daily.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So hot i spied on my mum as a girl who had discovered masturbating i didled myself a lot and saw her have sex with men and wanted what she was getting.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Please write next part

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