by VladimirKnockoff
Certainly the most purple prose I've read in quite some time--it would make a Harlequin novel roll its eyes with overuse of adjectives. (That's to say, there's a good story in there somewhere, but it was beaten to death with a thesaurus.)
Vladimir, you are a truly accomplished writer; your mastery of English prose makes your story a delight to read. That you have chosen to indulge us with a flight of fancy involving an erotic episode is just icing on the cake of your delicious imagination. Please give us more! This one's tragic ending (dead and buried! ouch!) in no way detracts from your great talent. I assume you have written and hope you will write other things, which we would very much like to enjoy as well. Lead on, MacDuff!