All Comments on 'Mountain Retreat Ch. 01'

by Playfulpanthress

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bdsmbillbdsmbillover 17 years ago
Pretty good

Nothing unusual in the story line, but still a pretty good read. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Suspension of disbelief required

Hmmm...having the cell phone calls re-routed, eh? The technology of "Alias" meets internet porn...but overall a hot read. Could take it a little slower and give us more juicy details.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great great great great great

WRITE PART 2,3, MORE

DarlingKDarlingKalmost 3 years ago

Such a sexy story! I love it!

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