All Comments on 'Mouse Bk. 01 Ch. 03'

Dude, you have me so hooked...

The author has created two characters who have actual personalities rather than the cardboard cutouts we usually read about. This reader has found that he cares about Mouse and Michael and what the future holds for them. The sex is good but the story itself is great. Hope that there is more to come.

I enjoyed reading every chapter!

I have read many stories in this genre. Rarely do I find myself, not only turned on but searching for the next chapter. Your story is one such tale or tail that I can look with anticipation towards.

Please continue we eagerly await your next installment

I check for more chapters and bookmarked this story; my first literotica bookmark in the many years I've been here.

Michael needs to marry Mona the Mouse and impregnante her. He might be fucking the other sister soon too!

You do great work. I must say that I admire the word-play as much as the eroticism. The fact that you're able to imply (or even state) a gap of time without it seeming like an excessive paragraph is truly important. Ah, the lovely dread of another chapter because how -could- it be as good as the last? :)

Once again your characters come alive. I'm hooked.

This story is easily my favorite in this genre. And as almost everyone writes brother sister incest stories (one of the largest categories), that's saying quite a bit. although I really love the relationship between your main two characters, my favorite thing about your writing is the justifications motivations and reasoning behind their actions! With near perfect pacing, extremely inventive dialogue and let's not forget, the volcanic hot sex scenes, you have managed to create one of the most erotic reading experiences anyone perusing this site could have! thank you so much for sharing your gift!

Arousing, well-developed characters as the previous comments have mentioned. I would not want fuck my sister, rather make passionate, meaningful love to her, get her off.

Believable characters with real depth in a relationship that makes sense. And, in fact, very erotic sense. A well-deserved five stars for all three chapters.

I'm looking forward to reading the later books. My only wish is that I had a day or two to set aside for the purpose.

--Carlus Magnus

I'm in love with this series. Truly. I know exactly how I'll be spending my weekend. My only regret is that I wish I would have found your stories sooner. Thank you :)

You keep reeling me in with the way you have developed the characters, right down to good old Dad but especially with snoopy Melanie. Few authors write such a good sex scene as you have created. I look forward to reading your next installment.

I don't know what the attraction is that makes so many writers on this site so fascinated with a woman's ass hole. It's nothing but a shit disposal system and has no place or useful purpose when having sex with a woman. What a turn off!

The old guy