All Comments on 'Mouse Bk. 03 Ch. 01'

This is AWESOME. Mona has really taken on a life of her own. I've always admired her spunk! But this really beats all. I never imagined she would come up with something so WILD.

I want to BE Mouse.

This story keeps getting better and better!

The details are great as always, Rob. I like that in June you're able to come up with the subtle details of winter as well as the "non-participants" in their engagement restaurant. So Michael gets his turn at abject self-doubt, does he? ;-)

This series is one of the best written pieces I've seen on literotica! Your writing allows the reader to visualize the characters and the environment in stunning detail. I look forward to your future submissions.

Rob,

It is getting so that other writers should be afraid of your submissions in this genre. You have added multiple dimensions and scope to this tired brother and sister incest section. I salute your writing and hope that you continue. Please involve Melanie somewhere; but continue with the game the sibs are currently playing. such sweet delicious torture and lust cannot just end. Or can it? I eagerly await your next offering.

It seems to get hotter as the story continues. I love Mouse's games! I can't wait to see what you've got for us in the next chapter.

I can relate to Michael's doubt and his true desire. I love the way you express his feelings for Mouse, wanting her but also trying his best to protect her. This is more of a love story than one of things taboo.