All Comments on 'Mouse Bk. 06 Ch. 03'

is it me or did you just totally skip over the whole situation with jack. i mean what happened the next day. did she betray micheal and have sex with jack or did she stay faithful.

The story of Mona and Michael is complicated, made furiously tempestuous, by everyone around them and by their own insecurities. ***

And, Anonymous, things can happen in the background. People sometimes choose not to deal with situations, despite their being heart-wrenching conditions. Mona isn't one to let things settle for too long, but it's only been one chapter! Give Rob a chance. I'm sure that he's hatching something with Jack that'll make you nod with enlightenment. Either way, does -this- chapter deserve a 3/5 vote because your questions haven't been answered, yet? :P

but I still want to know what happened the morning after their dates. Hell, what happened after the argument about her dress for his business get togather? Maybe a little to much jumping around.

Sure it did skip around from Jack to this but I still loved it. I know you said that you said you would write until you finished this story, so you obviously did, but they should have a baby. Sure it isn't right, but hey, they can do what they want. And there's always adopting Still LOVED IT :)

I FOR ONE DON'T CARE WHAT HAPPENED TO JACK OR ANYONE ELSE. THESE TWO ARE IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER, CAN'T STOP, WON'T STOP. IT DOESN'T MATTER ABOUT THE OTHER PEOPLE, ONLY THESE TWO LOVERS. WHAT THEIR LIVES TURN OUT TO BE IS THE MAIN PART OF THE STORY, ALL ELSE IS JUST WINDOW DRESSING.

Love the way the Prom Fantasy came about and the way things ended with Michael. Realizing his 1 desire to be a Father would'nt happen with Mouse.. and her being a Mother could,nt happen with Him. But never say Never.

I hopw he knock her up!!!

After babysitting it appears Mouse wants her own children. Unfortunately Michael can't see a way to give Mouse what she wants. He knows for Mouse to have children he must give her up. This relationship is so tragic.

Loved the continuation of acting out Mouse's fantasies of how things could have gone if they had given in to their desires 12 years earlier...and of course more hot steamy sex to keep the pages flying by!!!