by Rob_mDear
it has a real life ending. because not all ending in real life are happy ones. overall it was a pritty good story.
She can't have everything she wants exactly the way she wants it, but she -will- have what she wants. Mona's just learned a little bit of patience, maybe?
I know it had to happen, I understand it was wrong in so many ways.....but the love they share, once all the games had ended, was so pure, so beautiful. It was unbelievable and believable all at once. I just wished soeone otber then stupid ass,, fake ass Kate would have caught them and told the family, so they would be free to live and love... I hate you!!!
I stopped reading this to get off a long few chapters ago....now im about ready to cry.
This story hit too close to home but not because I committed incest but rather like Mouse I threw away my soulmate. Mouse will never find true happiness although she may find someone to love. It's a true tragedy.
I fucking love this story and never want it to end!
The writing is very good. I have invested a lot of myself in the characters Mouse and Michael but I'm extremely worried about after all of this reading having a downer ending. I'm getting ready to read the last chapter now.
Terry Floss
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