All Comments on 'Movie Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good one!

I loved the characterization and reality of the story--I'd like to see more of these characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
That was Hott!

Might have made for a better fantasy if she had been a bit better looking or if they hadn't all been so platonic for so long, but very hot, nonetheless. Well told. Not too much drawn out detail, just enough to set the mood. Great job!

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