All Comments on 'Movie Night'

when inexperienced virgins try to write erotica

have sex first, then try to write about it

The man had to be a combination of Doc Oc, Mister Fantastic(Elastic Man), and Jed Clampett

Learn english as well as getting some experience. "both of whom were dating" but you didn't state that they were dating each other? They could both be dating other people!

And the word is not "lied down" it is "lay down".

Brooke is a virgin, but also "clearly experienced"? hmm...