All Comments on 'Movie Night Ch. 10: Tammy's Place'

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RichardGRichardGabout 6 years ago

Any idea when we might see Ch. 11?

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 6 years ago
Next chapter?

Still trying to get my breath back after this one...

You really do write so well I can see it all so vividly. Almost like imagination is not required. I do write under another name, but nowhere near as good as you, as far as painting a picture with words.

RelentlessOnanismRelentlessOnanismalmost 5 years ago
I don't hate this...

...but it seems like a pretty severe handbrake turn. I realise you had a problem with how to deal with the mother, and this sort of solves the problem, but it was a pretty abrupt way to go about it.

I'd been enjoying this series, but this left field development seems out of tune with the rest of the story. The sex is still pretty hot, though.

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