All Comments on 'Movie Time Quickie'

But the ending was too abrupt.

Please continue!

This is amazing! More!

As I was reading I saw how real the story was and I drew a parallel to my own experience with my girlfriend in highschool. We were texting back and forth being very erotic until I voiced that I was "digging my nails into my wrist to keep from moaning right out loud". At which point I got that exact same text as in this story. "Bathroom. NOW." Your story threw me back to a very real sexual experience I had, and if that isn't a sign of realistic writing, I don't know what is.