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All Comments on 'Movie Wednesday'

by HHB733

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sopharoonessopharoonesalmost 11 years ago
nothing wrong with build up

erotic stories should have build up! maybe its a girl thing...duno, i enjoyed that story and wld enjoy more. maybe his viewpoint to hers or something?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice short story

Things like this do happen quite often. Nothing wrong with friends with benefits

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Nothing wrong with a bit of build up, BUT I think you went a bit over board, I almost gave up.

ErotonautErotonautalmost 11 years ago
No need to apologise

I appreciate context.

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