All Comments on 'Moving Day Ch. 02'

by Aibhilin

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
super excited to see you continuing this series!

Great writing, very hot.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518about 6 years ago
Nice follow up

I like this series and the characters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More, please

I’m someone who loves a good long drawn out tease, but don’t make us wait so long for ch3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I need

"I need... I need" THE NEXT CHAPTER please! ❤️

clitlicker4uclitlicker4uabout 6 years ago
Hope he pounds her cunt in Ch 3

There Will be a chapter 3.....Right?????

prop69prop69about 6 years ago
A good Father Daughter story

I do not like his abuse of his loving daughter.

So far he has shown no love, affection, and tenderness.

Hope you have another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wow I can not wait for the next chapter

Wow great story nice build up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What happened next?

I hope you continue this story, it’s soo good!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I need more

Where’s is the restbof this story this chapter was short...I need more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
concierge

A good concierge won't say the room number aloud for security reasons, The rest of the story was masterful. The ending left your readers looking for more. That's good.. A little weak as to where the protagonists were seated in the car. There were a couple of typos.

tattooed_cowgirl15tattooed_cowgirl15almost 6 years ago
Please write more!

The end of your moving day 1 had me cumming hard and I've needed that for about 3 weeks now so thank you very much for my orgasm. Please keep writing this story as I find it very thrilling

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Continue

When can we get part 3??

PhineasNPhineasNalmost 6 years ago
part 3

is playing in my mind right now but I'd like to have it on paper

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More

Please write more on this story!!

Kittykat0212Kittykat0212over 3 years ago
Holy Shit!

omg this story is hot af! pls pls PLS continue with chapter 3! Im a little conflicted as to having her ask to be punished though... I don't think she fully understands whatt she is asking for lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
PLEASE FINISH THIS

PLEASE!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please continue the story!

rosemaveyrosemaveyabout 3 years ago

yeah punish her !!!

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenover 2 years ago

You leaving this unfinished so suddenly is a crime

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Finish what you've started mate

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please write then next chapter

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I am a 28 year old grad student who enjoys reading erotica and writing, so I thought I'd give it a go.

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