All Comments on 'Moving Forward'

I really liked this story. It was tender and gentle and loving. My only concern is that there was never a mention of birth control. I have noticed, in the other stories of yours, that I have read, the guy just puts on a condom. I like that. At least let the characters mention that she is on the pill or something.

In this story; third date, and doing the zuga-zuga, so I had to assume that she is a "nice girl" that doesn't sleep around. You made me care about her...and him, so now I am "worried" for them.

In a world which surrounds us with instant gratification, it's easy to neglect that time - matters. Building a meaningful relationship takes time and communication, as much listening as talking (if not more - sometimes). The story line and dialogue in "Moving Forward" reminds us of both, taking time to listen to the other's wants, needs, desires, concerns, fears. Passion and romance are very much alive and well, as detailed in the story :)