All Comments on 'Moving On'

It was a good story but it sound like not ending story so hpefuly put ch. 02 thanks crh

thought I had already commented on this one - I love your simple but elegant prose style - the stories are so authentic that they must be partly true -

my ex used to delight in telling me her premarital adventures and had a tale very like this - you remind me of her - which is a compliment

The plot was good but, as with most erotica, the writing could have been better.