All Comments on 'Moving On Ch. 03'

From Gary to Billy to Dan to Jeannie to Brad to Abby back to Gary. Phew, I think I have that right. All connected in a circular plot revolving around the misdeeds of Colleen. Part 1 & 2 could have almost been stand alone. Part 3 tied them all together. Is there more? Once again, I think it could be complete, but I must admit it would be fun to hear from Colleen. She's so narcissistic that I'm not sure she'd come up with anything remorseful or redemptive or even remotely insightful. I enjoy your writing style. Once again, thanks for sharing. *****

First two chapters got three stars this gets five.

Great twist! Love it so far.

There's a whole hell of a lot of coincidences going on here. That takes a bit from the narrative but so far, I am loving it.

This is outrageously funny!