All Comments on 'Moving The Goalposts Ch. 03'

Not real happy with the story line, but it makes me pleased to see how well your writing has improved over chapter one. Keep it up!

It is the humiliation that turns me off.....how can a "loving spouse" treat her husband that way, and still profess to love him...it is beyond me. So...wish I had of taken your advice and not read the story...For me it pretty much sucked.

Have read a lot of these stories and while the infidelity is great for the "burn the bitch" crowd the humilation and being "owned" by a black man is a major turn off. Sam should cut his loses and let Paul have her.

Your story had such potential Now its just another BBC Cuckold story. Boring, Do all these women threaten there husbands with "fuck it for the last time" Good riddance whore!Kick her to the cub Sam Let her have Pauls BBC

An excellent if by the end a little predictable tale. Fact is a lot of us get turned on by such ideas, and that needs no further rationalising I think. Let those who enjoy different things have their enjoyment and instead of all the negativity find your own particular space on Literotica, or write your own for a change.

Only one word is appropriate - DIVORCE