All Comments on 'Mr. and Mrs. Valentine Ch. 02'

Even for fiction his behavior was unbelievable. You seem to think he has no sense of pride or self respect. You make her a egocentric, self centered bitch. The characters are dry and the story creates no real sense of either one of them being decent people. Which makes the story uninteresting.

At the beginning - he's dead. She stuffed her panties into his mouth right? And then left him. Eventually, while trying to breathe, the panties tickle the back of his throat, his gag reflex kicks in and he vomits. With nowhere to go he is forced to try and swallow the vomit but it goes into his lungs and he literally drowns in his own vomit. So the story ends there. But ignoring that fact and continuing with this drivel why would he do anything his wife wanted besides leave and divorce her? He wants to be exposed to every disease the wife's boyfriends bring home? He wants to be the father of a child his wife has by another man? Why? Why would any man accept being demeaned,degraded and humiliated? It make no sense, even in a fictional world, for a man to have no spine. Even for fiction this was just awful.

it's too bad there was never a thrid or forth chapter to really finish off this story..

See once You take the reality out of the equation, i liked the story and hope there is more chapters to come. Reading other peoples comments are like they want a real life scenario, i want to be entertained.

I will agree with "Anon" on one point.....this story has far reaching possibilities and I too, was sad to find it's over.!!

Yet kudos on a fine work!! A work that delivers on it's promise. I would like to see you return to it, at some point, and expand on it. You obviously have the knack for this genre, I find it very exciting....may I ask....are you female, by chance? I dearly hope so, not unlike your Sam here...I am fascinated by women who are able to tap into the sexual-psyche of a mind like mine. I've only known a few with that type of knowledge---but society calls them names...tries to hush them, with shame. I suppose many women actually have the "wild tiger" inside them, but I often moved on, before establishing the trust required to see it come out, fully. Yet, in a few others, I was able to instill a bit of knowledge which I am quite sure they have used to enhance relations, with new found loves. Finally, I confess I have never been forceful or dominate with a girlfriend (despite my interest in BDSM porn) it just seemed rude or improper or "un-loving"----I believe I am a "beta-male" in part due to lack of physical size but mostly it is an "attitude" which never felt right for me.....I rather lick,and pleasure than push n shove. Macho guys (perhaps like "Anon" here?) would consider me a "pussy", I suppose....but I don't mind, I fish differently than he perhaps, but my creel is always full. Thanks for the story...it was great---and the proof is when we want MORE!!!-------------------lol---so get busy and turn this slave into a cocksucking toilet or sumpin...hahahah

A follow up story would be greatly appreciated. Any chance that The Wife and The Mistress have a falling out over the rights to Sam's talented, submissive mouth?