All Comments on 'Mr. Black'

go mr black but dont let mrs black miss out in young pussy

Needs additional chapters. Maybe Mr. Black wants to "accidently" start a family with her?

All too fast at the end.

Different names needs sorting!

Lukas

It was good for a first story, but you need to give more detail. Have her tell how she felt when she saw his cock. How did it feel as his cock went in? How did it feel when he started fucking her? A good part was when he kept fucking her until he got it off even when his wife caught them. Have them do it again and again. Have the wife watch and urge her husband on as he fucks the girl. You made a good start. Just make your stories more pornographic. Details. Details. Details.

Did the trick for me.