All Comments on 'Mr Computer Cleaner Ch. 02'

I really love this story, but you need to do a better job describing the sex. Actually, I am really looking forward to the rest of the story, but you are really promising more than you deliver. I love all of the characters so far, and the basic story is well writen, but this is Literotica and more emphasis needs to be applied. The sexual encounters promise alot more than what is delivered. And I think they would be awesome.

This is script material. Looking forward to the next installments

I'm enjoying ambling around town with Dio, who speaks with Mr. Gregor's voice. Love the bits of song that reflect the action in those scenes. I have the same habit, so it feels very real. Also adds a layer of detail to the unfolding tale.

On to the next chapter!