All Comments on 'Mr. Fix-it'

Fantastic premise. Good ideas. Mechanics, grammar, spelling, word usage & execution need a good editor & proofreader. It would be so much more readable.

Get a good editor and you have a solid 5 story.

I liked your use of quotation marks and paragraph sizing. An easy read. I seem to like stories that are best set in the past. I read your Point of View as present tense. Consider using past tense. Thanks again for a good story.

Jack