All Comments on 'Mr. Fuckability Ch. 03'

You are having fun with this story and we are lucky to be able to share it with you. You keep adding little touches of wild passion and then dropping her back into the surrounding world. Somehow there is a hint of who she will be facing on Monday. You have created a wonderful ride and I don't know if I want it to end. Thank you

Enjoyed it - looking for the rest of it.

Nice job on building the tension and all, but you may have given away the "surprise" too soon. And the spelling errors and typos detract from the mood. I'll keep reading, though--I'm hooked.

THAT DIRTY TALK IN THE ELEVATOR HAS BEEN THE HOTTEST THING IVE EVER HEARD, LIKE IVE HEARD DIRTIER BUT THAT WAS JUST DOWNRIGHT PANTY DROPPING. ALSO I DONT KNOW HOW I MANAGED TO FIND THIS STORY AFTER 4 YEARS BUT I HAVE AND YOUR STORY MY FRIEND, IS THE REASON I LURK ON THIS SITE. SO GODDAMN GOOD. IM PRAYING YOUVE FINISHED THIS STORY BECAUSE I WILL CRY IF YOU LEAVE ME HANGING. UNFORTUNATELY YOU PROBABLY DONT COME ON HERE ANYMORW BUT BY GOD I HOPE YOU SEE THIS MESSAGE BECAUSE THIS STORY IS WHATS GETTING ME THROUGH THIS WEEK DESPITE LEAVING ME INSANELY SEXUALLY FRUSTRATED. SORRY FOR THE CAPS BUT YOU DESERVE THIS ENTHUSIASM. HOPE ALL IS WELL (hope this inspires you to continue writing) LOT OF LOVE