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Click here"I guess we'll find out when the door opens. Now shut up." He say and kisses me for real.
His mouth captures mine, taking control of the kiss, forcing my lips wider till his tongue is moving sensually against my own. His lips firm, commanding in all the best ways. He moans into my mouth, pushing his whole body against mine.
I forget everything but the feel of his lips. His strong heat pressing against my own. So much so that when he finally brakes the kiss to step around me I can't figure out what he's doing. Then I realize that he is just exiting the elevator.
I lean one hand against the elevator wall for support as I remember his seductive guarantee. "If it had been me fucking you in the elevator you wouldn't have noticed we were caught until I was done with you." Fireworks go off below my waist line. Holy Hell, he is right about that.
THAT DIRTY TALK IN THE ELEVATOR HAS BEEN THE HOTTEST THING IVE EVER HEARD, LIKE IVE HEARD DIRTIER BUT THAT WAS JUST DOWNRIGHT PANTY DROPPING. ALSO I DONT KNOW HOW I MANAGED TO FIND THIS STORY AFTER 4 YEARS BUT I HAVE AND YOUR STORY MY FRIEND, IS THE REASON I LURK ON THIS SITE. SO GODDAMN GOOD. IM PRAYING YOUVE FINISHED THIS STORY BECAUSE I WILL CRY IF YOU LEAVE ME HANGING. UNFORTUNATELY YOU PROBABLY DONT COME ON HERE ANYMORW BUT BY GOD I HOPE YOU SEE THIS MESSAGE BECAUSE THIS STORY IS WHATS GETTING ME THROUGH THIS WEEK DESPITE LEAVING ME INSANELY SEXUALLY FRUSTRATED. SORRY FOR THE CAPS BUT YOU DESERVE THIS ENTHUSIASM. HOPE ALL IS WELL (hope this inspires you to continue writing) LOT OF LOVE
Nice job on building the tension and all, but you may have given away the "surprise" too soon. And the spelling errors and typos detract from the mood. I'll keep reading, though--I'm hooked.
You are having fun with this story and we are lucky to be able to share it with you. You keep adding little touches of wild passion and then dropping her back into the surrounding world. Somehow there is a hint of who she will be facing on Monday. You have created a wonderful ride and I don't know if I want it to end. Thank you