All Comments on 'Mr. Posh and His Girls Ch. 01'

Was she in jeans or sweats? You seem to flip flop that a lot. She seems uncomfortable. I see where you're going with this, but definitely needs some help. Honestly, it feels like you wanted the fifty shades feel but it fell short of goals. Keep writing, it'll get there!

I like all the kinky things and this is a fetish area so readers should be expecting kink. I think you need to do a bit of editing and tighten up the errors in grammar. The jeans/sweats think was a bit worrisome. I give it a B- overall and I am one of your big fans.

love it, turned me on!!

Nevermind the Anon comment below, this was really good! Nice development, please write the next chapter(s)!

More please!

Loved it. I would give a lot to be the boss man in this story.