All Comments on 'Mr. Taylor Ch. 01'

by Untouched20

Sort by:
  • 8 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excellent debut!

Great story, keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
OUCH !

Was really hoping that the story would be longer you have created a very good build up between the two characters looking forward to the next71

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
GoodLuck

Fabulous story.

random_librarianrandom_librarianover 6 years ago
First story?

You are off to a running start then -- well done!

dauberdauberover 6 years ago
What a start

Really well done. You definitely need to continue this. Just cannot leave these two characters and us hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Awesome

The only disappointing part was that it was over! Waiting for the next instalment ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great work

Keep this story going!

ALFfromMelmacALFfromMelmacover 6 years ago
Has the makings of

An all time favorite! Please continue this excellent story!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous