All Comments on 'Mr. Tovall Speaks His Mind'

Great setup for a sequel

I have to agree, you've set the scene for what could be an interesting series.

The potential for this scenario seems almost endless, Particularly when Patricia gets back. Well done indeed.

A great fantasy story. Incredibly erotic, and I too can't wait to read more. Would love to hear more about the details of Lucy and Patricia's bodies. AWESOME

Needs more chapters.

I love the premise, and the dialog had me laughing out loud. I wish it had been longer, I thought you rushed the sex a bit. but I still loved it.

I don't know how you do it, but once again you've made a masterpiece. The only thing I can hope for is more! At least one more issue of this story would be amazing. When I first found this site, you quickly became my favorite author. Keep it up! :)

I'm so glad I found your work. I'm giggling and hard at the same time.

Haha, that's an excellent premise, very original.

I also wish for a continuation of this story. Perhaps though what makes this an extremely LOL and funny story would lose some of that if it were to continue much further. I suppose that's the thing about stories, at least good ones even in fiction. They capture the exciting part and stop just short of where it would become mundane.

This is something new. Liked 5 star.