by EelunPhetmoore
An interesting story of young man ogling an older woman masturbate. That scene was over the top but hot. Looking forward to Chapter Two which I can read right now.
One grammatical error I noticed: a which where there should have been a who. Minor problem.
Very good build to story, love the innocence starting out, and her hard nipples...
I try to give feedback on the stories I read. It is only fair if I get to enjoy a wonderful story, he author should get the benefit some kind of recognition. I read a lot of stories and sometimes I do not have time at the moment to write what I would like. In the case of this story I did not have time to write. This is my second time reading this so I could not miss the opportunity a second time.
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES THAT I HAVE EVER READ!
The time you spent to build up was just right, and the story is so true to life!
I hope you are planning more chapters! I will be looking for more.