All Comments on 'Mrs. Brown's Tale Ch. 02'

Good story maybe a bit wordy, it might help being a little more discriptive of one another. ie. Grooming of nether regions and emotions of characters involved. (personal preference) maybe a bit more intimacy and warmth. I enjoy the premise

On your last/only story, your words, ... had to leave something for the next installment..

That was almost 3 years ago! Why make a promise you can't deliver on ... this leaves this story as incomplete.

You have potential, but without following through this gets 2 stars.

Good story. Enjoyed the plot development; however, the character development stopped. The romance, intimacy. sensual excitement did not materialize. That said, you wrote and had this story published!