All Comments on 'Mrs. Cheng Pays the Debt Ch. 02'

by Wifetheif

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MitchFraellMitchFraellabout 10 years ago
Still going well

Please carry on with more chapters

dwbdazdwbdazabout 10 years ago
Agreed, looking forward to more

Please continue. So far,very good.

dirtyomandirtyomanalmost 10 years ago
Very Nice!

I am very impressed with this series of storys. Going for #3 now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I was really enjoying this story until your repeated use of Anne's name (7 times in a 10 sentence paragraph). She's the only woman, there so try using personal pronouns. Please take this as constructive criticism.

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