All Comments on 'Mrs. G'

..a bit of conflict would be really nice, like the son getting them caught doin!

This story would fit better in MATURE category.

best wishes,

Anon from Spain.

Not a bad story...but cheating is cheating!!! And reading this story make us think that what she wanted was to fuck the son, but got the best to that: fucked the son's friend...1*

but this one is hot for a may to september encounter.. kinda wondering how the writer will follow up

God, this is just so good. Please keep writing.

Ignore the critics. This story is great just as it is. I look forward to reading more from you.

But did I miss any reference to Jamie's father, deceased, in jail, on the lamb, divorced, whatever?

Well, you commented on the story, which makes you a critic. By YOUR "logic" we should ignore you.

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I love assholes who can't just comment on stories but have to slam others who dare to have a different opinion. Ya like the story? Fine. Ya don't like the story? Despite your stance, also fine. It must be horrible to have such low self esteem that you can't even stand to read or hear opposing opinions.

Of course, if they continue they will get caught. Your writing is of good quality and the story held my interest. More, please!

A really bad start, huh. Then, of course, in this category there should be a husband to be cheating on. I guess I missed him in there somewhere. You have promise.

Good story, but lacks real life conflict. Just guess the turmoil in her mind if her beloved son caught her fucking his friend.

If the cheating or marriage are not only mature young connection the exact category is Mature hub.

I read this story and gave you a 5 before checked your Bio page. Wow! This is your first submission? Unbelievable!

You'll find Loving Wives a tough sell. It's full of folks with some definite ideas of what LW should be, even if their idea conflicts with the site managers stated requirements. Lets see, 'Extra marital fun,' check--she's married and she fucked someone she isn't married to; sounds extramarital to me.

Seriously, I think this is the very best first submission I've read, but saying that, I'm not denying it has its weak points and some were pointed out by others. Consider their comments. At least I didn't see any "dumb ass cuckold baboon who should eat shit and die," comments. It's still early, however, don't give up hope. Without those astute comments you can't become a full-fledged member of our tight little group.

Keep writing, you have talent!

If you can accept a humble call to a mistep in your plot:

the shift from dutiful mother hen to wanton loving wife of a bestfriend son a bit abrupt.And i have to agree, the way you wrote, i was thinking the son would caught her(and would be a interesting situation).

5* for a first effort.

Everyone else was a bit too.oblivious and all other characters got obliviated once the liaison began. But both Tony and this tale own a charm that can't be denied. Full marks. *****

Great story, I loved the details and descriptions ! One of the best I read in awhile. Really hit the spot! Can't wait for the next one.

....would have best been placed in the "Mature" category....as it's about a 45 year old married woman and a 20-something young, single man.

I would imagine that LW would mostly be focused on the married couple, the young man being peripheral...but that's hardly an issue.

A very enticing first submission! Thank you, and please continue this story....for the sake of all of us everywhere that in our youth, experienced sex and love with a hot, sexy mature woman.

I was 21, she was 40, so not quite May/December, but I've never had a woman since, that could hold a candle to her....and how I wish we could have made something more permanent together. We couldn't. She feared the family backlash she was sure would result if we "came out".

I agree...a Chapter two is due. You have the characters in play, her mood is right. His strength known. Do it !

Thanks Don

So your spouse disappoints you in some way sexually, of course it becomes legitimate to start having sex with others. And what's the use of discussing your frustration with your spouse first? Sure they could be having a medical or psychological problem, but, why let that possibility interfere with the free pass card you are inventing for yourself. Sounds like a very normal loyal loving marriage to me. So when the husband and his son find out that his college mate has been fucking his mother, we can only wonder what the fallout will be. Wonder if you have the imagination and the balls to write that story. I suspect her self image will change from this: "The feeling of being attractive and wanted has invigorated my sexuality to new heights." Yeah, wonder what her self image will be while she spends the rest of her life being thought of and treated as a whore by her husband, son, and the rest of her former family. Can't wait to read that chapter. Batter up?

Loved it, but wish you would have let him cum in your pussy...

Wish my wife would fuck one or more of my son's friends! Super hot!

Will next chapter be in Incest/Taboo? What is the family members reaction? Is the husband creampy eating cuckold the son will fuck his mother? Will BTB be with husband and son who have SPINE?

Thanks for sharing.

Interesting. I liked it a lot. Very erotic and sexy. Good job!

Another great read and another great character. She and Karen are a lot a like. Thoroughly enjoyed them both.

rj

another cocksucking fag posting dumb cuck SHIT.

Very well written too.