All Comments on 'Mrs. Griffin'

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boaman007boaman007about 6 years ago
great story

Can there be another installment to this story?

Lonely_readerLonely_readerabout 6 years ago
It's not my usual cup of tea

But I really enjoyed reading it, the build-up and the sex were very good.

A little bit less the characters: Carol particularly let herself go way too fast, for it to feel realistic.

MostdefinitelyMostdefinitelyabout 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks, guys

boaman, I thought I'd get one or two requests to continue the story. But if I did continue it, I don't think it would be appropriate to post it in this category. Maybe it'd suit the Mature category, or BDSM. Would you still read on?

And Lonely_reader, I hear where you're coming from. Though, I thought I left enough clues to explain why she three-sixtys. But even I thought the anal sex came in too quick. I'll try harder next time.

Thanks for your thoughts.

WhiteWizardWhiteWizardabout 6 years ago
Thanks

I agree with the earlier comment... a second chapter is called for.. May be focused on the D/s side of the relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
shared

I think he needs to share her with his friends!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
So good

Well, I'm a new fan!

Your writing is great and this story fantastic. The past, discription...not crude, pushing the limits just fare enough.

I dont care in which cathegory you put the next chapters, but please continue with these characters.

Your master, in my view is not all that crual and thats a turn on.

Cant wait to read more.

Josie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

It would be great if you got the wife of the guy the pastor was with to be brought in and be Mrs. Gs pet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
New fan

Loved the storie, best I have read in a while and I'm here 4 or 5 days a week. Great !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please

This should have more chapters so the pastor can be humiliated

BBCMaster4CucksBBCMaster4Cucksabout 6 years ago
Barely the begining

I'm sure Pastor will fall for that kid cock

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Continue

Plz continue with the paster having no choice but accept their relatiomship. the stud keeps his teach to himself

jen739jen739about 6 years ago
Lovely story

Thanks for publishing- really enjoyed it tonight sir :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
5 stars

I fucked my Minister's wife, although she was not a teacher. She was also a cum dump and loved it up the ass; maybe it's a religious thing?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Sounds like me and my sister

Had to threaten my sister to out her and my brother in law of tax issues they had to the IRS.. they'd lose everything.. suffice it to say we're still having sex.. it's been over a year but she's more willing now.. She now knows he's cheating on her so she's not hating me anymore.. The sex ,which was very very rough, as I treated her like a whore, is just pure lust now.. A 23 year old woman in nylons?? Paradise.. I'm the luckiest 19 yr old in the world.. pounding my older sister in the bed her and her husband use, with her legs UP n my shoulders.. priceless.. yes chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

First two pages was good.

Never a fan of pets ,chains doggy walk. It drops my excitement.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
A very good yarn! If only ALL teachers were like Mrs. Griffin!

You tell a very good tale because you're a very good writer. Thanks for this trip you took us on. Wish I had teachers like her. Believable despite what some said in the comment column! Loved it - keep on writing! 5-Stars!

artspankerartspankeralmost 6 years ago
Excellent !!

Excellent !!!

pubelesspubelessover 5 years ago
Great story

Loved how this in story she came to love being buggered

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
nooo

can't u finish this most expeted series instead of a boring one

blackknight314blackknight314almost 5 years ago
I don't usually go for this genre...

... however this was good. I'd like to see her punish her hubby the way she was. Maybe get Kevin to come over and film him and Mr G. I bet Mr G is a closet bdsm guy, not a submissive. But Mrs G could make him one. Oh , well...

MostdefinitelyMostdefinitelyalmost 5 years agoAuthor
@Anon

Yes. There will be another chapter or two of this story. And it'll remain in this category. I think Mrs. G's gained enough interest for a sequel. Hopefully I can get it done soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Continue

A very hot story. Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Though for part 2

Make Mr G a cuckold and suck his cum out of her ass.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Fun to read. Well told. Good plot line, completed short story. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This is one of the better blackmail stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I also fucked a minister's wife who was a school teacher. Nice boobs, great legs. Shapely. Showed a lot of thigh. Nice tight hairy pussy. When she got wound up she was insatiable. Loved to be eaten and licked.

amoroneamoroneover 2 years ago

There are some options here to further the adventure. Good luck and thanks for a fascinating story.

MostdefinitelyMostdefinitelyover 2 years agoAuthor

Sorry y'all. There really is a part 2 to this story. Just been having a lot of problems

4Leather4Leatherover 2 years ago

Very nice, can’t wait for the follow up.

jcus0511jcus0511about 2 years ago

Hot & erotic, well written & a lot of fun to read. Well done.

HannibalBubbleHannibalBubblealmost 2 years ago

That is one awesome story. And it reminded me of my school teacher as well. Great job dude, you can do the second part of the story, I believe in you :D

FluidswallowerFluidswallower10 months ago

As you hoped, Yes, I enjoyed your story immensely! Carol turned out to be a deliciously sensual and sexual woman, though I don't consider a slut, merely a woman who accepts knowing what pleases her and what pleases her lover. Well-written and quite arousing. Thank you.

Outlaw485Outlaw4853 months ago

Same old storyline, student black mail's teacher. Teacher says oh no and goes along with it. You think someone would come up with something original.

SirDylanSirDylan22 days ago

Interesting story line…well written…looking forward for more. Thank you!

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Currently working on three projects at the moment. Mrs. Griffin Pt. 2, Mom's My "Someone Special" Pt. 3 and a brand new novel length incest story I'm feeling excited about. I should be done with the sequels this year and the novel maybe next year. I'm a slow writer as it is, ...