All Comments on 'Mrs Henderson's New Job Ch. 02'

But, I think it might be better with fewer, longer chapters. I did feel a bit cheated when the story suddenly stopped without very much development.

Even so, I'm enjoying the premise of your tale and looking forward to more...

Keep up the good work

Tom D

I understand the short chapters,but you take too long between chapters. People reading your story loss interest in it if they wait this long.Short chapters should be followed up every day.

Would love to read more and sooner between chapters.

By noon she will be dripping down her leg.

If she will be " dripping by Noon ", I'll position my tongue at the juncture of her thighs and her knees so I can lick up every drop of her bodily secretions. EVERY one!!

It's not necessarily a bad thing to have short chapters. You're doing the right thing by ending each one on a kind of cliffhanger.

I enjoyed reading them so far. It seems unlikely she would find it so easy to take to being naked while teaching but, hey, suspension of disbelief is in operation.

The main thing is: Just keep them coming

But the shortness and abrupt ending is a little disheartening. I hope you are taking this as intended and just constructively and not me trying to insult your writing. You are a good writer and came up with a good concept. I don't think you need to post "every day" if you do short chapters but I do think you would benefit from making longer chapters. Writing a little and coming back to it when you have new ideas. With a subject and plot that can be taken in many directions like the one you came up with its best to take time to write it out and give it detail so it can be much more enjoyable and worthwhile. Your detailing on the background of why this "program" started and the benefits they've already seen is great and can open more subplots.

Writing can't be rushed even when the readers seem to want it that way.

Does Mrs. Henderson have children of her own? If not, would she like to have her own? If yes, what are their ages? How do her husband and they feel about their mom's exposure at work, and her emerging exhibitionism?

this is looking up to be a good if not a great story. it will be interesting where you take it . hope to see more chapters and how the story developes. keep on writting !

Such a great story and great writing. Sure hope we get to see more chapters soon.

The theme of this story might make one think Mrs. Henderson will be teaching high school youths in her classroom, but carmenlee already stated the students in St. Jude's school are all 18 to 21 years old. That makes them college-aged, and they and she can 'can noodle' with each other without worrying about the 'age problem.' And, by the way, I much prefer the shorter chapters. Write on, carmenlee! Right on!

YOMEYO

More please.

Mrs. Henderson is catching on quick! Soo much more to write about! Interesting Story!

Finish the additional chapters it requires.

I love this story as I myself have worked naked and understand how it feels, and you are very close to how I felt. my office agreed to work nude to raise money for charity. I as a supervisor had to show leadership, and before work made sure I was nicely shaved below with just a touch of hair above my pussy, knowing everything would be on show, but I thought if I was going to be I would look my best.walking into my office was so hard as I knew the guys would be looking but after a few minutes I didn't mind. late afternoon our top boss turned up and sat (clothed)through a meeting and I had to write on the whiteboard and take the meeting. I to let the guys look at me and to be honest I enjoyed it, and even bent over more than I should.

my wife teaches in an adult learning centre and I love the thought of her doing it naked