All Comments on 'Mrs Jones Makes A Plan'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Why is this under Incest/Taboo?

Not a bad story at all, but missing some key elements for the category.

MrLurkerMrLurkerover 12 years ago

4* Most enjoyable.

But seducing the boy down the street is

not incest...

Wrong category.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good start

but just because she says 'fuck mommy' doesn't make it fit here. Tell you what - you can make it up to us with a 2nd chapter, have his sister catch them in the act, and have a 3some

oddsandendsoddsandendsover 12 years agoAuthor
The category is "Incest/Taboo"

As this story covers "Taboo", perhaps a followup will include the other half for fans of that aspect.

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantover 12 years ago
Should be First Time or

... God forbid, Loving Wives

No incest, unless there is a foursome somewhere in the future

No taboo

Not bad, but too predictable - had Rob known what to do - and done it - I would have liked it better (as contrasted with the stereotypical step by step instruction)

Suppose Mrs Jones had sort of had the idea - and Rob banged her straightaway - and then it turns out Rob and Kate have been banging each other since [insert earliest date Literotica would allow]

tobytimtobytimover 12 years ago

vey sexy & ertic, could be room for ch 3,,, bring katie intop there sessions

xgigglesxxgigglesxover 12 years ago
wrong category

i'm not to bright, but unless you can come up with the bro/sis fucking. this story ain't incest.

Baloney_PonyBaloney_Ponyover 12 years ago
Incest?

Yeah, because people who were related to one another had sex. They didn't have sex with "each other", but you "can" call it incest. Just like, if they had sex "doggie-style", it could be "bestiality", right?

Jeez. Incest. Who'd've figured he'd call "this" incest. Wow.

oddsandendsoddsandendsover 12 years agoAuthor
categories

Ok LOL, I get the message that some fans of Literotica believe that the "Incest/Taboo" tag should be limited to stories specifically involving incest. I believe the common interpretation of the tag "Incest/Taboo" is "Incest and/or taboo" with regard to sexual relations. If Literotica intended this to be an exclusive tag then I have no doubt that it would be simply "Incest". While incest is a specific subcategory of sexual taboos it is of course only one of many (e.g. adultery or bestiality or older men having sex with young girls, etc). I would politely suggest to such readers that they petition Literotica to change their tagging scheme for stories to reflect their preference.

That said I hope that those commenting found this humble bit of pulp porn at least mildly entertaining (or stimulating) despite its somewhat predictable plot. OaE

GizmorGizmorover 12 years ago
A Plan

Guess when you finish this Tail, the story will fall into place. I personally don't like a 15 minute short story bout banging my sis. Calmly waiting for the PLAN! Thanks.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
A lot more story to be told yet

Does she fall in love for the young stud Robbie, and will she become pregnant by him?

Perhaps she could find a way to get her new stud to fuck her more often than just on Saturdays, since her husband isn't fucking her.

Robbie is young, and she can train him to be just what she wants from a man, and to be her perfect lover. The man she wants to be with, and the father of her second baby.

I hope that the author continues with this good start, and the young stud wins out for her love.

Thanks for the read

bluewillybluebluewillyblueover 12 years ago
Enjoyed the story!

Great story, wrong category!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Incest ?

Maybe we are not giving the author enough credit, having mentioned that Robbie looks very much like her husband could it be that he does indeed turn out to be her son from an earlier fling between her hubby and the neighbour?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
The implication,

maybe it was not her husband at the start but a rear view of Robbie and his sister going at it. They look alike she thinks.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 10 years ago

Got to agree with the other commenters re the lack of incest. Calling herself "mommy" does not make this story an incest story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
should have forgone the shower

She had the perfect opportunity to get even with her cheating hubby

After studdly filled her to the brim with his young studdly sperm,, she should have forgone the shower

Later in bed she could have turned the lights nice and low and squatted over the cheatin fuckers face and insisted she be ate out

Then later she could have asked him if Robbies cum tasted as good as his sisters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Sad that the young man lacked any personality....

Seemed more like a best behaviour boy, verging on a robot.

Also read your response to category...Incest IS taboo, which is why it's Incest/Taboo and intended specifically for Incestuious Taboo.

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Thanks all the same for your efforts.😊

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