by oggbashan
Your story has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout.
Scarves are very erotic, but I like skin on skin much better, and without a condom.
I very much look forward to the next installment of your story. She is entrancing.
The story would have been better if you had left all.those scarves and ties out of it. More caressing and foreplay could have been written in place of that.Therefore would have made the story better. After all we are taking about a virgin.
This story was written FOR the fetish category. The use of silk scarves IS the fetish but anonymous thinks the story should be rewritten. Why?
Very nice written story. Given 5* to story.
I like mature women - young boy stories.
While reading I imagined Mrs. Lamb of age 30-35.
OH HOW I WISH this lady existed. i would visit her help and anything she needs.