All Comments on 'Mrs. Peavy'

do the world a favor and never write again.

"...making love to Mrs.Peavy. My little girlfriends could not compete with Mrs.Mary Peavy"

Can you possibly not write Mrs. Peavy every sentence?

Perhaps the use of a more common pronoun - "She", "Her" comes to mind.

Yes, the Mrs ... was a little over used but not terrible. Keep writing. Be safe Semi Fi

A '75 Pinto with a CD player??? Yeah right..

Do you know how to spell rape?

Cunnilingusforever

The story was okay. Maybe not Shakespeare, but pretty good grammatical structure, which is so often sorely lacking here. And a cd player can be installed in any car, right?

not the worst i ever read but the Mrs thing was over done

Yeah, this was written like it came from some gyrene grunt groundpounder

My gawd...that was horrible.

This story Sucks.

But Mrs. Peary Doesn't

Enjoyable! Brought back some memories of my activities between HS grad in Jan and my second grad in June at Deigo. And yes you can put a CD player into a 74 Pinto. Also, the term is Semper Fi.

Not good.

Could have been a lot better, maybe multiple chapter. One fuck in the ass and the story is over. Go into detail about the rest of the day.