by Madabouthair
I've really enjoyed this one so far. Keep it up! I'd love to read about their further adventures.
I am a peeper of the harmless type, I simply enjoy watching my female neighbours no matter what they look like. I don't tape or masturbate so the fantasy scenario was very exciting. Well done on writing such an incredibly good story, we need more!
The story brought me in and kept me on the edge on what happens next!
Really nice story that takes a potentially nasty subject and makes it erotic, Excellent.
Touches me in too many ways...feeling and knowing no one wants you....beautiful story...
A good story that reveals who we are as people, with attitudes that need to change. For some it's about the view of others. Others need to examine themselves. This story does both.
There are a couple dithering errors, but still a good story.
Great story where is the second part shows every one has needs and they can control them and enjoy each other
Good set-up and character development; it's not nice to leave us hanging so long...
i appreciate how much people seem to like the story. in response to some of the comments, this was NOT a chapter. This is the entire story. If it was a chapter of a longer story I would have noted that in the title.
The ending is left open for the reader to create. I left it with Tom and Gracie being happy in their own peculiar ways.