All Comments on 'Mrs Riesin's Son Ch. 04'

Just one person's opinion. A lot of the rest was good.

Absolutely fucking loved it! Please continu with the story

Write more don't leave us hanging like last time!

More please! What a cliff hanger at the end. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.

Well, scat DOES do it for me! Let's see where this goes. And make it graphic, please.

Very well written... Please continue and let him be used and abused by both mom and sis.. And please include both wet and scat in graphic...

Despite the scat, I really love how this is progressing, love how you take the time to describe the scene and looking forward to the pussy play.

Perhaps putting him into the crotch of some panties while she humps a pillow? Having him use his fore-arms to stimulate between the labia whilst suckling on her clit? Unbirthing, and having to stimulate the g or a spot depending on whether he's in there head or feet first, being subjected the convulsions of her pussy? Being bathed in her squirt and having to imbibe as deeply as possible to avoid drowning? Cleaning her up afterwards? Maybe have him weed and trim her pubic hair as an ongoing chore? Chances are she'd never get a close shave anywhere else!

My mind races and my cock aches in anticipation, please post again soon!! (with less of the scat if possible, but unlikely given the progression so far.) 5-starred and fav'd.

write about him falling in the toilet and the both of them use it before he is found.

Please, please, PLEASE make the next chapter!

I hope the next chapter gets posted soon.

One of the best stories I've read. Your pacing and description of the male's humiliation and the female's enjoyment of the humiliation are amazing. Can't wait to see how it continues. So many possibilities

Only to go dark for 6 months after each submission. We understand masterpieces take time and effort but, MORE MORE MORE!

Chapter 5 is in the works! No promises on time frames but I can guarantee more is coming.

Thanks for the update! Looking forward to it :)

So wanton anticipation. I'm going to explode.

Jeez man when are you gonna post 5 I keep coming back to read 1-4 it's a great story you need to pick up the pace with 5 lol

super cool so far, any estimates on time frame for the next one?

wont have to keep checking back then

i think he's dead

Excellent writing.

I hope he comes back to continue.

Sorry about the delay! Had a bit of a break from writing, but the next chapter is in the works again and is shaping up nicely.

still waiting for part 5 :(

bro, c'mon bro, bro, bro part 5 bro.

bro.

On part 5!!!???

this is great, really good writing.

I want part 5 please, i want them both to toss him in the toilet and use it hard core

and so we wait.......

we needs that update

More Please. We definately need more :D